Stormcloud

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GENERAL

Name: Stormcloud
Name Explanation: Storm: because of his mostly grey pelt, and cloud because of his big, puffy, pelt.
Gender: Tom-tom
Age: 36, was it?
Clan: Riverclan
Rank: Warrior

APPEARANCE

Body Type: Muscular and Tall
Fur: Grey and white
Eyes: Orangish-yellow
Markings: A white mustache. ^^
Overall: There is no mistaking Stormcloud, no way. He is super distinct and has particularly long fur for a riverclan cat. You see his well muscled body and know that fighting with him would be a bit of a loss for you, your whiskers would be tied by the end of that match! He has a white mustache, which is odd for any kind of cat, and makes him super distinct. His orange eyes are haunting when he's mad, and comical when he isn't.

PERSONALITY

Positive Traits: Serious, controlled, loyal, hard-working.
Flaws: sometimes controlling, too serious at times, old-timely (sticks with the old code), and strict.
Fears: His lovely mate dieing, and/or his clan not prospering.
Quirks: Not lazy at all, actually, he does as many patrols and hunts as he can manage. Also, he enjoys star-gazing and talking towards the heavens.
Ideals: Loyalty, seriousness, honesty, and do-gooders.
Overall: When you speak to him, some are impressed, some are intimidated. He is the typical old-time grandfather type cat. He is very serious, he goes by the rules and is very strict to them to the point of OCD. Stormcloud tries his hardest to keep the clan together and always works his way to keep the clan in good health. And when you think he may be a scary cat to fight in battle, in the nursery you'd think him a big feline with a bigger heart.

HISTORY

Family: Ashpaw, Snowpaw, icefeather(mate).
History:
As a kit, Stormcloud always looked up to the deputy's and senior warriors, and hated the ambitious kits who thought themselves so much better than the others. He was proud when he became an apprentice, and was apprenticed to Leftear, who later died, and became a warrior soon thereafter. He had always been so strong and independant until he met Icefeather, who he fell madly in love with and couldn't control his emotions, he tied himself to her every moment and soon they had their two kits, Snowkit and Ashkit. He was so proud and visited them every day up until they moved into the apprentice den, where he often goes to see his kits.

RP SAMPLE

Unnecessary.

[Administrator]

Accepted!

I love his personality; he's a normal-aged cat with an old timer's values, a very responsible cat without being described as "perfect." The only bad thing I can say about this bio is that a spell check couldn't hurt it; you say "dieing" instead of "dying" and "deputy's" instead of "deputies."

Looking forward to seeing the interactions between him and his children!

xx Duskfrost