Post by blackie on Feb 11, 2010 21:35:33 GMT -5
GENERAL
Name: Shadehawk
Name Explanation: Shade-For his dark colored fur and eyes
Hawk-HE was a brilliant hunter,always told he had an eye like a hawk
Gender: Tom
Age: 39 moons
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Potential Deputy
APPEARANCE
Body Type: Slender and fit
Fur: A deep charcoal color
Eyes: Dark brown
Markings: splotches of different shades of brown however most go unnoticed
Overall:
Shadehawk has long thin fur that gives him an airy look. The main pelt is a deep charcoal however since he is a tri-colored cat, he has markings of brown and silver. The shades of brown go unnoticed most times. Same with the silver unless you really get a close look at his fur.
His build is slender and fit, rather dainty under his pelt. The muscles can faintly be seen, etched out in his legs and hindquarters. His legs are long and limber, his paws small and dainty, giving him the epitome of a graceful, composed cat.
Underneath his scars, this tom is rather handsome. Shadehawk's most notable scar is the deep, thick one running down the left side of his muzzle. There are others marring his face, too: the three parallel lines down his right cheek are growing fainter, but they serve as a memory of his first battle. There is a long, crescent shaped mark running down his right foreleg. Along his body, there are countless numbers of small scars, from the remnants of flank-gashes to puncture wounds from claws. However, many are hidden under layers of shaggy fur.
PERSONALITY
Positive Traits:
1.Hard worker
2.Genuine
3.Likes the company of others
4.Understanding
Flaws:
1.Quick tempered
2.Fairly bossy
3.Air-headed
4.Phlegmatic
Fears:
1.Dying
2.Cats losing faith in him
Quirks:
1.He likes to rhyme, its not often and not usually in a conversation, but its almost like a past time
2.To disapear. He enjoys running, taking the long way around the territory. Sometimes he just needs to be alone.
Ideals:
1.He values his clan. If someone takes Thunderclan away from him his life is gone
2.Virtues. The warrior code is meant to be followed not to be broken. He doesn't believe in Forbidden loves.
Overall:
A cat's first impression of Shadehawk is that he is unapprochable. He just has that aura about him; that he's the kind of cat that needs to be pried open. He also tends to be extremely solitary. The events of his past have made him wary to trust anyone. This entire combination gives him a reputation of stoic badassness - the "don't cross me" type
However,although that is how he seems, those who truely know Shadehawk know different. He is aproachable. He likes to voice his opinions to help others. He is a hard working individual who enjoys the company of others. He likes to patrol with cats he doesn't know much so he can get to know them. Even though he may look scary, he just wants to be the one that everyone loves and enjoys.
Shadehawk is a very clever cat too, almost like a detective, able to deduce the real from the fake. That means that if a cat lies to him, he is bound to be punished later, once he finds out the truth
HISTORY
Family:
Dawneyes-Mother
Eaglefeather-Father
Hawkfeather-Sister
Weasletail-Brother
History:
Kithood-He was given a female name as a kit. He wasn't to fond of it really. Shadekit. When warriors looked at him when he was first born they laughed. WHo would name a tom Shadekit? That was a females name. He was always grumpy and hard to tame after that. He complained to his mother, wanting to change his name. However the name really did fit after all.
He grew to understand why he was given the name shade, it was for his dark shaded coat. However he still didn't like it. Why couldn't he have been given the name Dark-kit instead. The laughter stopped but he knew that he was being laughed at from cats on the inside. He could tell who was lying, and was not. It wasn't until he caught his first peice of prey as kit that cats started to respect him. However he was punished, only because he had snuck out. It was worth it though.
Apprentice ship-He was given a great mentor. However his mentor wanted to focus on Battles,fighting. That's not what he wanted. Ever since Shadepaw had caught his prey, he wanted to hunt. That's all he ever wanted to do. As he grew older, he was brining in prey left in right. When Thunderclan was at war he didn't want to fight, he would wait back at camp, when the injured warriors came home he would run out and hunt, bringing back more than enough prey, of course he had help from others. OF course he had his share of fights, since hunting alone would not be enough to make him a warrior. Other than that, his apprentice life was fairly quiet.
Warrior hood:
He liked his name now. It had meaning, it had power. He loved it. He was given the suffix hawk simply because of his skill and liking of hunting, however now it was time to grow up. Battles were one of the first things he volunteered for now. He knew his strength would be needed. It wasn't long before he got his first apprentice. That's when he understood how important battle skills were. However like where his heart layed, he started with hunting, and ending with the most essential. HE soon became well respected among his clan. Always doing chores and offering to help. However , he was famous for bossing others around, not in a mean way of course. He was always losing his temper over larger things, but it still angered him. However, even with these small flaws, cats could still approach him for advice or help, he really didn't mind it much.
Now he is currently working hard to be a deputy in Thunderclan. He hopes that Coldstar will see his potential as that rank. However he also knows that there are many other warriors who are wanting the spot as much as he does and will do anything to snag it away. Even if they do, he knows that all the warriors that Coldstar looks at each day, are very much worthy.
RP SAMPLE
See Sageflame