Arcticblaze

[arctic]

GENERAL

Name: Arcticblaze
Name Explanation: Arctic is a place of great cold where Cream believed her ancestors were from. He was named blaze for the odd pattern in his eyes.
Gender: Tom
Age: 30 moons
Clan: ThunderClan
Rank: Warrior

APPEARANCE

Body Type:
Arcticblaze is abnormally large for a clan cat. He is very tall, and weighs about 24 pounds. His paws are also large, and are the home to large sharp knife like claws. His fur makes him even more intimidating, because his size his harder to see. This body has made him a weak rabbit hunter, but he makes up for it by being the toughest fighter in the clan.
His muscles are large and he is strong.
Fur: Arcticblaze's fur is long and the purest white you have ever seen. It is usually clean, because of his grooming habits. It effectivley covers all if his scars, none of which are on his face. It doesn't tangle or mat, being the fur of a Norwegian Forest Cat, and is very strong. He usually only sheds during the change of seasons. When wet the fur becomes extremely heavy, and has made a Arcticblaze a horrible swimmer.
Eyes:

Arcticblaze's eyes are mystical even by the standards of cats. The outer part of the iris is a light ice blue that steadily gets darker. Toward the inner part of the iris the blue is as deep as that of a lake. Farthest in is a fire colored circle. It can only be described as a blazing fire of red, in the center of a partly iced over lake.
Markings: None
Overall:
Arcticblaze has a moderatly long tail that is also furry. His teeth are white and sharp. He has a pink nose.

Nightly Appearance
Arcticblaze shines bright white in the moonlight. He is often mistaken for a StarClan cat on the full moon. The blue of his eyes are bright, but the inner blaze of red cannot be seen.

Short Description
Pure white heavy tom, with mystic blue eyes, and large paws and claws.

PERSONALITY

Positive Traits:
He is very ambitious, working hard to help his family and clan. He hopes to be a clan leader one day.

Arcticblaze has a fierce loyalty to his family, kin, and friends. He just hopes that none of these will never clash

Arcticblaze is kind, always willing to help others.

He is also wise in battle, planning wuickly and efficiently.
Flaws:
To trusting
Can disregard the warrior code.
Wants to be friends with cats out of his clan.
Rebellious at times.
Fears:
Failure
The River
Having his clan reject his ideas.
Quirks:
Loves kittypets
Does not get cold easily.
Ideals:
Justice
Honor
Equality
Overall: Arcticblaze is courageous, and a kind warrior. He listens well to his clan mates, and takes everything they say into consideration. He can sometime be too serious though. He loves his clan dearly and would give a life fore even the weakest elder. Arcticblaze is very open minded, and does not favor the warrior code.

HISTORY

Family:Granddam: Daisy, yellow and white , 72 moons
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Uncle: Lion, Cream with white underbelly, 42 moons
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Cousins:
Moon, Silver and white shecat, 5 moons
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Sun, Gold and white tom, 5 moons
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Diamond, Cream and white shecat, 5 moons
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Lion's Queen: Sweetie, long haired Tortishell, 38 moons
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Arcticblaze's Mate: Cream, Long haired cream shecat, 26 moons
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Others:
Jupiter, Gray tabby and White tom, 50 moons
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Selena, Cream's littermate, brown and white with orange head mark, 26 moons, pregnant by Mars
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History:Arcticblaze was born a kittypet with a warrior father. His sire was a ThunderClan deputy known as Whitefur, and his dam a kittypet called Milky. Whitefur was smitten with Milky upon their first meeting, and after a few visits they became official mates. He told none of his clan mates about her though. Milky lived with an old pair of breeders, and her home was full of purebred Norwegian Forest Cats. The cats knew they were descended from a clan of forests cats from a faraway land, and even the fattest among them dreamed of living in the wild. Their twolegs were strict though, and they were never allowed outside off a leash. One day the male twoleg died, and things changed. The nest was not taken care of properly, and a broken basement window was left unnoticed. Milky was the first of the cats to take advantage of this.

Milky was young, and was just coming in to her first "season". Her mother, Daisy, had explained this to her and Milky was instantly frightened. She knew that her twoleg would soon want her to breed with one of the males in their home, and then they would take away her kits. Milky ran from this possibility and found herself on the border of the forest. It was here that she ran into two rogue males, both of whom were interested in siring her kits. Milky was afraid, and decided to fight away the cats.

Whitefur had just been appointed deputy of the clan a moon ago, and on the same day had received his second apprentice. He and Rockpaw were hunting in the forest when they heard the yowls of a fight. Assuming that it was members of their clan they ran to the battle to find the rogues attacking Milky on ThunderClan territory. Whitefur and Rockpaw attacked the rogues, and with Milky's help they chased them off. Whitefur was amazed by the kittypet's willingness to fight two strong rogues, and was instantly smitten with her. Milky was impressed by Whitefur's strength, and appreciated his help. After conversating with Whitefur and Rockpaw, Milky was escourted back to her twoleg nest.

For two months Whitefur, and sometimes Rockpaw, would visit Milky outside of her nest. Milky expressed her want to join the clan and Whitefur and Rockpaw taught her how to fight and hunt. Milky was a natural and she attributed this to her own wild ancestry. Whitefur and Rockpaw became familiar with Milky's family, and eventually Whitefur and Milky took one another as mates. It was not long before Milky was heavy with kits. Whitefur planned to bring her back to the clan while pregnant, but she became heavier than normal. Daisy believed that the twolegs had given her medicine so that she could have more kits. They had no idea that her coming kits were not purebred.

Milky gave birth to a litter of nine, and all of them survived because of twoleg care. Two moons after their birth Daisy told Milky to flee with her kits. Daisy knew that it was about time for the kits to be sold away, and she wanted them to live happily in the clans. Milky did as her mother said, and fled to the clan during a snowstorm. The trek was hard with the high winds and heavy snows, and two of her kits were lost in the night-long journey. Eventually they were found by Rockpaw and a patrol, and Rockpaw was able to convince the others to take Milky and the kits to the clan. On their arrival Whitefur announced to them that Milky was his mate, and that her kits were his.

The clan objected strongly, but Littlestar allowed them to stay. There were no kits in the clan, and few apprentices. He was also afraid that he would lose his deputy, and believed that he would not be able to keep his clan safe without Whitefur. Unfortunately greencough spread through the clan. It hit the nursery hardest, and only Arctickit survived. When Arctickit was four moons old the clan fought a harsh battle against RiverClan and Whitefur died. Milky was greatly hurt by the lost, but her and her kit were supported by the clan.

When Arctickit was six moons old he was made an apprentice, and Rockslide became his mentor. Rockslide was honored to be mentoring the kit of his own mentor, and the two bonded deeply. Milky was given a warrior name, Milktail, for her cream colored tail. Arcticpaw trained hard, and grew fast. He soon became one of the clan's fiercest fighters. During the Battle of Snakerocks Arcticpaw, Rockslide, and Milktail fought valiantly, but tragedy struck Arcticpaw doubly. Milktail was crushed by a monster while chasing away ShadowClan cats and Rockslide was blinded in the fight. Rockslided joined the elders and Milktail joined StarClan.

In a state of shock Arcticpaw found it hard to socialize with his clan. He spent his time training hard with Littlestar now and when he was not training he was hunting. Arcticpaw became estranged from the clan and began wondering about his kin outside of the clan. One day Arcticpaw wandered into Twolegplace searching for the nest he and his mother had left so long ago. He found it, and was met by a beautiful kit named Cream. Instantly they became friends, with Arcticpaw teaching Cream everything he knew about being a warrior. Arcticpaw also met his granddam Daisy. She remarked at the relationship between Cream and Arcticpaw and mourned the loss of her daughter.

Arcticpaw became Arcticblaze, and he continued to visit the cats in Twolegplace. Arcticblaze and Cream became mates, but refrained from having kits. Arcticblaze began to reconnect with his clan, and became highly respected among them. After many moons of balance, Arcticblaze's world changed once again. The twoleg that took care of his family died. Arcticblaze began teaching the nine cats how to hunt and fight with the help of Cream. The Norwegian Forest Cats were all wild at heart, and it did not take them long to learn. They began to earn a reputation in Twoleplace, and with that they came under persecution from a band of rogues. Afraid that his family was not strong enough to fight such a large band of rogues Arcticblaze promised them he would convince Elkstar to allow them to join ThunderClan.

RP SAMPLE

Cor walked into the Cyber Gym control room. One of his younger siblings was supposed to be meeting him for a training session. Cor had felt bad about his relationship with Orpheus. They were not particularly close, but Orpheus showed promise. Normally these sort of training sessions were for the whole cabin, but there wasn't as many students there for the summer. It gave him a chance to get close with the year around kids, the ones who needed the most attention. The teacher was wearing denim pants, a black t-shirt, and a leather vest. For him this was how you train. Antaeus was already in the main room, he couldn't exactly fit in the control room. The hellhound was pacing around the Gym, clearly excited at the chance for a training session.

Cor looked through the many different scenarios he could use. Normally they would be related to the Underworld, it made his siblings the most comfortable. In all reality, he wanted something more for Orpheus. The cabin leader made it his business to know the past of his students, and Orpheus needed some mental training as well. That was why he decided that a hunt for the Teumessian Fox would be the best idea. The scenario was one of the most difficult in terms of the hunt, but the actual battling was only moderate. Cor chose the scenario, and put in his teacher code. Then he stood up, and climbed down the ladder into the Gym itself. At it's normal setting it was a purely robotic room. When the program was activated it would use the greatest holographic technology to change everything. The pain they felt in here would be real, and that was the reason students could not be there unsupervised.

[Administrator]

Pending.

Please don't post images in the bios, they end up looking tacky and stretch the forum. You can always post links to the images though.

Throughout the personality and appearance section, you refer to him as "Arcticstar" so if you could change that, it'd be lovely. I assume you used a character from another site which is perfectly fine, just make sure to change all the information.

Could you add a few more unique positive traits? Ambitious, Loyal, Kind and Intelligent are the bland character traits that every cat seems to have. Think outside the box a little, find a few more creative and interesting traits. From his current personality (as well as history) he seems a lot like Firestar-incarnate... and we don't want canonical characters running around. His flaws sound good though.

Now... about his history. I'm sorry to say that, here at Downfall to Paradise, we don't accept kittypets or loners unless they are purchased. This goes for cats who were born kittypets as Arcticblaze was. This is in part because we don't want a ton of Firestars running around and in part because Tigerstar and Brokenstar's influences on the forest hold through until today. Firestar never existed in the lore of Downfall to Paradise and therefore, evil reigned for a time. The old prejudices against kittypets ran strong through the warrior bloodlines, meaning no cat would accept one into their Clan. Therefore, I'd greatly appreciate if you'd change his history. Also, we do not accept specific breeds, so Arcticblaze cannot be a full Norwegian Forest Cat.

If you'd still like to keep a similar story-line in his history, his mother and father could be from different Clans or something of the sort. Or, if you're set on the out-of-Clan history, I'd be more inclined to accept a cat with a loner past than a kittypet one. I'm very sorry for the inconvenience, Arctic. This does look like a nice bio and once you make the changes I'll be sure to look at it again and accept it!

xx Willow